Most of what I'd say has been said already, but just one more thing: your last step of LSE (edge permutation). This step should take 5-6 moves at most. When you're doing untimed solves it may be useful to try to find shorter solutions. Try out different things, or possibly just look them up if you want.
Someone's actually using them!

By the way, are my recognition explanations good enough? Is there anything I could do to make anything else better? I'm trying to make the whole thing easy for people new to CMLL to learn, but I've not really asked for any feedback yet, so I don't know if I'm overcomplicating everything...