JianhanC
Veteran
You really must turn faster. But if your cube is not allowing you to you should take advantage of that to lookahead, so that you can optimise your moves. I see a lot of unnecessary moves. Also you need to control your rotations, so that you don't lose track of what you're doing. Nothing much to add about edges, lookahead faster than you turn. 3x3 will improve by practising 3x3, and when you get comfy with turning on bigcubes. And lastly, you could have used R' U R U' to setup the diagonal edge to the opposite, then doing the PP alg. Much less painful.