The Roux "Example Solve" Game!

[Pyjam]

Can someone critique my solve?
(I've "slowsloved" it and noted each step, so not a speedsolve, but pretty sure I've done it ± like that)

y2 x' //inspection
D F D' Rw U2 M' F' //FB (7)
R2 U' M' U Rw2 U' Rw2 U Rw M' U' R' //SB (12/19)
F RUR'U' F' //CMLL1 (6/27)
RUR'U' R'F R2 U'R'U' RUR'F' //CMLL2 (24/41)
U2 M' U2 M' U M2 U' //lucky L6E (7/48)

The FB is easy, you might tried to forecast where the DR edge will go.
In this case, it ends up in the worse situation.
With a small modification, you can get a much better position with an easy SB.

y2 x' // inspection
D F D M' D2' r' U F //
U' r' U' R U R2 U R U' r U r'

Anyway, you managed to solve the SB very well.
Not a critique but there was a way to solve DF-DB in the same time.
It's no longer Roux, though.

y2 x' // inspection
D F D' Rw U2 M' F' // FB (7)
U R2 U M' U' r2 U2 R2 U2 r U2 r' //
U r' U r2 U' r2' U' r2 U r' // OLL
x R' U R' D2 R U' R' D2 R2 // PLL A

CMLL are easy. Many algs are also used for OLL.
Ironically, using it gives a barely shorter solution, even using the "advanced" EOLR technique.

y2 x' //inspection
D F D' Rw U2 M' F' //FB (7)
R2 U' M' U Rw2 U' Rw2 U Rw M' U' R' //SB (12/19)
U' r U' r' U r' D' r U' r' D r // CMLL
U M2' U M U M U // EOLR
M' U M2' U2 M U2 M2' // LSE

In short, your solution wasn't bad at all.

 

[Pyjam]

U' L2 R2 D' L2 F2 L2 U2 F2 U R2 F2 L' F R B L F2 U B2 L'

(z2) U M' U2 D' R' U R2 D2 // (8) FB
r U r' R' U r U2 r' U' r // (10/18) SB
M2' U F U R U' F' r U R' U' r' // (12/30) OLLCP
U M U2' M U' M2' U2' // (7/37) L6E

NEXT : U2 B2 U2 F2 R2 U L2 D' L2 U2 F2 L B D' B' F L' D2 R2 U'
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[nedistanman]

Critique me please and thank you

U2 B2 U2 F2 R2 U L2 D' L2 U2 F2 L B D' B' F L' D2 R2 U'

First Try:
(y') D2 R' u2 B U r B' // (7) FB
r U R' U2 M' U' R2 U2 R U R' U' R // (12/19) SB
R R2 U R' U R U2 R' U2 R U R' F' R U R' U' R' F R2 U' R' // (20/39) CMLL idk sune so i 2look
M r' U' M' U2 M U2 M U' M' U2 M' U2 M U' M U2 M' U2 M2 // (19/58) LSE

Second Try:
(y') D2 R' u2 B U r B' // (7) FB
U r U2 M r' U' R U' M U' R U' M2 R' U R // (16/23) SB
U2 R U2 R' U' R U R' U2 R' F R F' // (13/36) CMLL
M' U' M' U2 M U2 M U M' U M2 U M' U2 M' U2 // (16/49) LSE
r2 // (1/50) fix misoriented centers

First Try but if i knew the cmll
(y') D2 R' u2 B U r B' // (7) FB
r U R' U2 M' U' R2 U2 R U R' U' R // (13/20) SB
F R' F' R U2 R U2 r' // (8/28) CMLL
U M U' M U' M' U2 M' U' M2 U' M' U2 M2 U2 M' // (16/44) LSE

Sorry forgot scramble:
NEXT
D U2 L2 F2 L' D2 R B2 U2 R2 F2 R' D2 B' U B' R2 B D2 L' R'

 

[Pyjam]

Critique me please and thank you

The only comment I have on your 3rd try is that for the LSE, you may solve UF-UB instead of UR-UL.
It's much simpler in this case: U M U' M' U M2' U M U2 M' U'

Next: D U2 L2 F2 L' D2 R B2 U2 R2 F2 R' D2 B' U B' R2 B D2 L' R'

(z2) L' B' F2 R U' F // (6) FB
R U' r U M U R U2 r' U' R U2' M' // (13/19) F2L
U2 x' R U R' D R U' R' D' x // (9/28) Solved

NEXT : L2 R2 U' F2 U L2 B2 F2 U' F2 L2 F' R F2 R' U2 F' L R' D'
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[WoowyBaby]

NEXT : L2 R2 U' F2 U L2 B2 F2 U' F2 L2 F' R F2 R' U2 F' L R' D'
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L B D' R2 D2 R' B2 D' // EO FB (8/8)
R U' M2 R' U R U2 R' // SB (8/16)
D' R U' R' D R U R // CMLL (8/24)
M2 U M U2 M' U' M U2 M' U' // LSE (10/34)

Next: U' L R2 F2 R2 U2 B2 D2 R2 D B2 U' F R' B R U' L' R2

 

[Brest]

Next: U' L R2 F2 R2 U2 B2 D2 R2 D B2 U' F R' B R U' L' R2

x2 y
L F2 u2
U' R' U F2
r' U r U r U' r2
U2 M2' R' U' r
U R U R' U R U2 R2' U' R U' R' U2 R
M U' M' U' M U2 M U2

Next: L R B2 L B2 D2 L2 D' R' B' D2 F' R' B' F2 L' F L2 B

 

[nedistanman]

Next: L R B2 L B2 D2 L2 D' R' B' D2 F' R' B' F2 L' F L2 B

y // inspection
R' U2 M2 F' B2 // fb
M' U R' U M U2 M' R' U' R // sb
U2 F R U R' U' F' // cmll
M2 U' M U2 M U M U M' U2 M U // lse

Next: F' R2 D2 R2 D2 B D2 F' U2 F L2 B2 D B F2 L' F D' U2 L2 F

 

[Brest]

Next: F' R2 D2 R2 D2 B D2 F' U2 F L2 B2 D B F2 L' F D' U2 L2 F

y' x'
U' R U' R' F U2
x' y F R2' F2
d L U L'
R' F' U' F U R U R' U2 R
U2 R U2 R' U' F' R U R' U' R' F R2 U' R' U'

Edit: Sorry Rouxbois, got my threads mixed up!

y2 x'
L' U L' U' F D2
x U' R U R' U' R U R'
U2 R' U R U R' U R' D' R U R' D R2
M' U' M U2 M' U' M'
U' M' U2 M' U M U2 M U'

Next: L2 B' R2 B F L2 R U' F D' B L' D L2 D' L D' L' F R

 

[nedistanman]

Next: L2 B' R2 B F L2 R U' F D' B L' D L2 D' L D' L' F R

D' U2 B' U r B' U' R2 F // fb
U' M' U2 r2 U R U R U2 r U r2 U' r // sb
R' U' R U' R' U2 R U2 R U R' F' R U R' U' R' F R2 U' R' // cmll
M' U M' U' M U' M U2 M2 U M' U2 M // lse

I made an attempt at multi-slotting in second block and intuitive eolr in lse.
Also I'll work on CMLL's. I learn a set then the next day I drill it. So far I have O, H, Pi, and U.

Next:
U2 F L' R2 D' L2 D B2 D R2 U B2 F2 R2 B' D' L D2 F L2 D

 

[Pyjam]

U2 F L' R2 D' L2 D B2 D R2 U B2 F2 R2 B' D' L D2 F L2 D

y D' R' B' U R L2 B U R2 D2 U' R' // (12) FB + square (with EO)
M2' U R' U R U2 M2' R' U2 R // (10/22) F2L
U M F' r U R' U2 L' U2 L // (10/32) COLL AS
M' U' M2' U' M2' U' M' U2' M2' // (9/41) Z-Perm

NEXT : R2 F2 D U2 L2 U' F2 D' L2 R2 F2 L' B' R2 D' F' L2 U' B2 D2 B2
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[irontwig]

NEXT : R2 F2 D U2 L2 U' F2 D' L2 R2 F2 L' B' R2 D' F' L2 U' B2 D2 B2

R' F U' L2 R U // FB
F' R' L2 D L' R' U' B' U B U L' //SB+CMLL
B' R L' D' R L' //EO
F L2 R2 B' //L&R
F2 L R' D2 //M

Next: F' R2 D2 F2 U2 F D2 B U2 F' R U2 L' D2 B2 F R D' B F'

 

[Pyjam]

F' R2 D2 F2 U2 F D2 B U2 F' R U2 L' D2 B2 F R D' B F'

z2 U L' B2 U' D r D // (7) FB
R U2 R U R' U2 r M2' U' r U2 r' // (12/19) SB
U2 L' U2 L U2 r U' r' F // (9/28) CMLL
M2' U M' U M U2' M2' U' M2' U2' // (10/38) LSE

y2 x U2 R U r' D' M U' r F' // (9) FB
r' U' r U' R U r U2' M2' U' // (10/19) SB
x' U2 L' U' L U' L' // (6/25) CMLL
M U' M' U2' M2' U M U2' M U' // (10/35) LSE

NEXT : D' B2 U R2 L' B2 D B' U F' U2 D2 R D2 L B2 R D2 B2 R D
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[WoowyBaby]

NEXT : D' B2 U R2 L' B2 D B' U F' U2 D2 R D2 L B2 R D2 B2 R D —

(y2)
E2 f M f2 D' f // FB (6)
r U' r' U' R' r2 U' R' r2 U2 R U R2 // SB (19)
R' F U2 F' R F R' U2 R F' // CMLL (29)
U2 M' U' M' U' M' U2 M U M U2 M U // LSE (42)

Next: R' B R U L2 B2 L2 B2 D' U F2 R2 U2 L B D U L2 B2 D'

 

[Pyjam]

R' B R U L2 B2 L2 B2 D' U F2 R2 U2 L B D U L2 B2 D'

z2 y E U2 R B' r2' R U F' // (8) FB
M U2 r U R' U2 r' U' r // (9/17) SB
U2 R U R' U' R' F R F' // (9/26) CMLL
U' M2' U' M' U' M' U' M' U M2' U M // (12/38) LSE

NEXT : B2 U2 R B2 L2 F2 R2 U2 R U2 L' D' F L R U F' U R' F
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[nedistanman]

NEXT : B2 U2 R B2 L2 F2 R2 U2 R U2 L' D' F L R U F' U R' F

z' y2
r R2 U B u // fb
U2 M2 r U r2 U2 r U r' U' r // sb
F (R U R' U')3 F' // cmll
M' U' M U M2 U' M U2 M' U2 M2 U2 M' // lse
// 43 stm

NEXT: B L' D2 F' R2 D2 R2 U2 F R2 U2 B U2 F2 D L2 R' D L R D2

 

[irontwig]

F R' L2 U //Square
L2 U2 F' R' F2 U' //FB+Square
L2 U' B2 L2 F' L B' L' F L2 B U //SB+CMLL+EO (lol)
M B2 M' B M2 B' M B2 R' L' //LSE

Next: L2 B2 L2 R2 D2 U' B2 U' R2 U' L' F' U F2 L D2 F L R B

 

[Pyjam]

L2 B2 L2 R2 D2 U' B2 U' R2 U' L' F' U F2 L D2 F L R B

y U F' M' U R2 F' B2 // (7) FB
R' U R U R U r' // (7/14) F2L
R' F' U' F U' R U R' U R // (10/24) CMLL
U' M' U M' U2 M U M2' U M' U2' // (11/35) LSE

NEXT : D2 F D' R' U' R U2 R B' L D2 F2 L2 U2 F' B2 L2 B' U2 R2
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[narusite]

NEXT : D2 F D' R' U' R U2 R B' L D2 F2 L2 U2 F' B2 L2 B' U2 R2

yx'//inspection
R' S Rw2 u Rw2 u //FB (6/6)
U R U Rw' U' R U R2 U' R2 U' R U Rw' U' Rw //SB (16/22)
F RUR'U' F' //CMLL (6/28)
U2 M U M //step4a (4/32)
U' M2 U //step 4b (3/35)
M U2 M' U2 //step 4c (4/39)

45h, 54q, 39s, 41e

NEXT: F B' R' D L' B L2 B D F2 R2 B' R2 U2 B2 L2 U2 R2 F R2

 

[Pyjam]

F B' R' D L' B L2 B D F2 R2 B' R2 U2 B2 L2 U2 R2 F R2

y r2 F U F2 D2 R F2 l2 // (8) FB
U' r U2 R2 U2 R U r U2 r' U' r // (12/20) SB
U M2 // Edge control
U R' F' r U r U' r' F M' // (12/32) CMLL + EO
U' M' U2 M' U M2' U // (7/39) LSE

NEXT : U2 L2 R U2 B2 F2 R B2 F2 R2 U2 B L2 U2 L' U' B' L2 B2 F' D2
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[nedistanman]

U2 L2 R U2 B2 F2 R B2 F2 R2 U2 B L2 U2 L' U' B' L2 B2 F' D2

z2 y'
U F' U F' U R B' // fb
U' R U2 R U' R' U M2 R' U R // sb
U2 R2 F U' F U F2 R2 U' R' F R // cmll
U M U' M' U2 M U2 M' U M' U2 M // lse

Can't seem to get sub-40 movecount... Can you guys help point out any huge inefficiencies in my solve?

Next: D F' U' D R F' D L B R2 U R2 L2 U2 F2 L2 B2 U F2