Is my keyhole tutorial ok?

[Steve AC]

Any tips/advice/thoughts?

ty

 

[DNF_Cuber]

Any tips/advice/thoughts?

ty

I can understand it, but I already knew keyhole so I wouldn't notice hard to understand parts probably.

 

[Deleted member 36445]

what's with the funny music?

good tut btw

 

[LukasCubes]

not bad, its pretty good

 

[Steve AC]

ty everyone

 

[abunickabhi]

not bad, what is your next tutorial about?

 

[SenorJuan]

Constructive criticism ?
Please, NO background music.... just you and the cube.
It would be logical to start by demonstrating the two basic keyhole techniques : inserting a first-layer corner using an empty middle-layer edge slot; and inserting a middle-layer edge using an empty first-layer corner.
Then move on to advanced techniques, tricks.
I posted a few tricks in this thread, they may be of interest:
https://www.speedsolving.com/threads/keyhole-method.63735/

 

[kubesolver]

I think the tutorial is not bad.

- I like your voice
- I like the amount of information in a single video
- I think you cover the concept well
- I like to-the-point approach without long intro and outro

Having said that, there are some things I don't like and I would wrap it up in a "too high noise-to-signal ratio".

- There are a lot of parts that are not essential to the tutorial like you trying to figure out a way to setup some case.
- Some parts obscure your points (like the incorrectly executed sequences).
- Some parts I find questionable and not thought out well, like suggestion to do keyhole triple-sexy, when triple sexy itself preserves solved edge so can be done directly on the target slot.
- The music I find distracting.
- Your camera loses and regains focus
- You move cube too much. I would prefer if it was more stable

 

[Steve AC]

I think the tutorial is not bad.

- I like your voice
- I like the amount of information in a single video
- I think you cover the concept well
- I like to-the-point approach without long intro and outro

Having said that, there are some things I don't like and I would wrap it up in a "too high noise-to-signal ratio".

- There are a lot of parts that are not essential to the tutorial like you trying to figure out a way to setup some case.
- Some parts obscure your points (like the incorrectly executed sequences).
- Some parts I find questionable and not thought out well, like suggestion to do keyhole triple-sexy, when triple sexy itself preserves solved edge so can be done directly on the target slot.
- The music I find distracting.
- Your camera loses and regains focus
- You move cube too much. I would prefer if it was more stable

Thank you, these tips will go toward furure endevours.