please comment my solves thanks

[chikato_tan]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KD8j-P9kHaI
and comment to help me improve my skill , thank you

Statistics for 09-03-2010 21:34:11

Average: 18.44
Standard Deviation: 0.64
Best Time: 16.43
Worst Time: 20.20
Individual Times:
1. 19.60 F2 D' U2 L2 B F D2 L' F' U2 L R B' F D2 U B' F2 D' L2 B' U R2 D' R
2. (20.20) D' U' B2 L B2 D' B' L D' B2 F D' U2 R D2 L2 D' U2 L' B' R' B2 D L' R
3. (16.43) F' R B R' D F D2 L2 R2 B2 F L B' F L' F U2 L' B2 L' B' F L2 B F
4. 17.86 L' R' F' D' U' L2 D2 U' B' R2 D' U L' B' F' U2 B L2 R F' L2 R' B' F' R'
5. 17.86 D2 U2 R2 D' B L2 B D2 U R' F2 L' D B' D' B2 D2 U' R2 U' F D2 B D' U

 

[jiggy]

Inspection is way too long, and you should really switch to cross on bottom for easy look ahead to F2L.

Did you watch past his first solve?

I thought that your alg execution was a bit long some of the time. Maybe you could drill some of your worst cases?

 

[Joker]

Your hands are a little clumsy. Try to have more control over the cube.

 

[chikato_tan]

thanks ,what else ? i`m trying to improve my problems

 

[xXzaKerXx]

next time, type: [ youtube]your URL[/youtube] without the space in the first part.

 

[chikato_tan]

thanks