Thesis correction

[Swoncen]

Hi,

I'm about to finish my master thesis and my supervisor told me to show my thesis to an english native speaker to correct grammar and other things that I do not see. I thought maybe one of you can read through the thesis and correct errors. I would greatly appreciate that and will write the one in the acknowledgment if you want. I think it will take about 1 hour or 2 to read the thesis, you don't have to understand content. We can arrange for the reward but I have to say that I cannot pay much, I'm still a student. Please respond if you are interested.

Thanks,
Andi

 

[OregonTrail]

I'd love to edit your thesis.

 

[pjk]

What is the thesis on? If it is something that interests me, I'd be willing to read it.

 

[Swoncen]

The topic is "Unexpected Human Behavior Recognition in Image Sequences".

It's done with automatic image processing and pattern recognition algorithms, so it may be interesting for some of you.

If you are interested, please write me your e-mail address per PM and I send you the thesis.
It is in PDF format and it would be great if you can mark the errors and write the corrections as comments. But everything else is great too =)

Thank you!

 

[miniGOINGS]

Ohhh, thesis!!

 

[OregonTrail]

Swoncen, I have a reply to your question, but you PM box is full. ; )

 

[Stefan]

The topic is "Unexpected Human Behavior Recognition in Image Sequences".

Is that detecting thieves and terrorists with surveillance cameras, for example?

 

[Swoncen]

Swoncen, I have a reply to your question, but you PM box is full. ; )

Cleared. =)

The topic is "Unexpected Human Behavior Recognition in Image Sequences".

Is that detecting thieves and terrorists with surveillance cameras, for example?

Yes, exactly. But my algorithm specializes on detecting unexpected behavior in crowded scenes like mass panic, evacuation etc. It's somehow more difficult because of occlusions etc.

 

[Stefan]

Oh hey, I have a better usage suggestion:

1. Train it with cubing videos of Rowe, Feliks, Erik, etc.
2. Apply it to cubing videos of me.
3. Tell me what I do wrong, i.e., the unexpected turning behavior

 

[miniGOINGS]

Oh hey, I have a better usage suggestion:

1. Train it with cubing videos of Rowe, Feliks, Erik, etc.
2. Apply it to cubing videos of me.
3. Tell me what I do wrong, i.e., the unexpected turning behavior

Cheater! Using computer software to improve, oh wait...

 

[Swoncen]

3. Tell me what I do wrong, i.e., the unexpected turning behavior

The output of the algorithm would be, that you are to slow. *lol*
No, it is not possible to do that with the algorithm.

 

[Dene]

...the unexpected turning behavior

Mr. Pochmann's repeated use of this smilie lately has scared me somewhat.

 

[Stefan]

Mr. Pochmann's repeated use of this smilie lately has scared me somewhat.

Can't help it, my PR manager insists.

Oh and I'm curious: How much text is the thesis? Checking in 1-2 hours sounds quite short. Then again, I'm a slow reader...

 

[Swoncen]

Since it contains image processing algorithms, most of the work are equations and example images. 1-2 hours was a rough estimation.

 

[Swoncen]

Thanks to Andrew and Rowan for correcting my thesis. Andrew made a very precise correction which was very usefull and Rowan corrected the whole thesis. Thank you guys!