Solve critique/tipsCan

[LeafeonSage]

Can you critique my solve? (I got a PLL skip)
file:///home/chronos/u-82efbe10efe90281968ff6b9f0b56453ccebf13e/MyFiles/Downloads/Untitled%20design.mp4

 

[CubeLite]

Can you critique my solve? (I got a PLL skip)
file:///home/chronos/u-82efbe10efe90281968ff6b9f0b56453ccebf13e/MyFiles/Downloads/Untitled%20design.mp4

1. The link doesn't work
2. You should record more than just 1 solve, cuz one solve doesn't show every weakness you have

 

[LeafeonSage]

1. The link doesn't work
2. You should record more than just 1 solve, cuz one solve doesn't show every weakness you have

Darn it.