My website(feedback)

[fcwy1]

My website,
http://fcwy1.weebly.com/

just want comments, feedback n suggestions

Eg, products too expensive

 

[Stefan]

First it looked interesting but then I saw the annoying "u r" moron language so I'll stay away for now. And what do you mean with "i'm having exams now so won't be selling, only taking orders"?

 

[nitrocan]

Aren't those algorithms straight from speedcubing.com?

Edit: I just looked at the website more carefully, you are just giving links to other websites.

 

[fcwy1]

ok. thks 4 the feedback.
i know the website is very unprofessional.
will get rid of the moron language after my exams.

"i'm having exams now so won't be selling, only taking orders"?
means i won't be passing the product to the person yet but can take orders.

btw, i trying 2 learn ur bld method, but still very confused

 

[Stefan]

Aren't those algorithms straight from speedcubing.com?

Edit: I just looked at the website more carefully, you are just giving links to other websites.

But presenting them as his own (I need to look at the URL to see it's not). Suspicious.

Is it possible to change a poll vote? Because my opinion will hopefully change a lot (right now I'd say "bad").

 

[fcwy1]

yup. it's frm other websites. i'll write it there

can't see how 2 change a poll vote.

Tried to make the website a bit better.

 

[AvGalen]

Layout is good, content is bad. Since I prefer content over looks I voted bad

 

[blah]

Dude, I'm not shy when I vote. And that response wasn't personal. It just is.

How not to be horrible: Fill it up with substantial information before you even announce it to the world. (And you really don't have to advertise SgCubers on every page, what with the low resolution and uh... take of the Games section since your title says fcwy's cube page?)

What to keep: The design. That's good web design there, one click away from wherever you wanna go.

 

[badmephisto]

yea, i like the minimalistic approach to the layout. content is obviously lacking but you know this

 

[cookingfat]

Sorry but I voted bad as well. As soon as I read the home page I knew straight away there would be no way I would order products from you. You don't exactly fill your potential customers with confidence. There are a lot of small punctual and grammatical errors, you at least could have used the full word, 'Algorithms' instead of 'Algos'

I have to agree the layout is ok, and it's very easy to navigate around the site.

I think you should have cleaned it up a lot before presenting it to the public, but I guess you just want some feedback on how it is now.

 

[PatrickJameson]

For the algorithms you should make your own page with the algs you use. Your just linking to other sites. That's not very helpful. Also the random game doesn't make the site better.

I think the layout is good, but the content...not so much.

 

[fcwy1]

What content i can add, i can't think of anymore.
Any good websites examples that you think is one of the best?
Will change the OLLs and PLLs to my own ofter my exams.
thanks for the feedback.

 

[rachmaninovian]

work on your language? its overtly singlish in my opinion right now i voted...something.

 

[fcwy1]

Can give examples?
i got mixed up between proper english, slag and singlish

 

[nitrocan]

Algorithms instead of algos, you instead of u, are instead of r etc.

 

[rachmaninovian]

Can give examples?
i got mixed up between proper english, slag and singlish

let me tweak this little post just a little bit.

Can you give some examples? instead of "can give examples"? thats brokkkkkkken english

 

[fcwy1]

Thanks for the feedback.
So how is the re-organised one now?