i made a song, opinions?? ^__^

[nat4sail]

soo i made a song today, i did sample parts of it. tell me what you think.
i drew the picture too ^__^

*PLEASE TRY TO WATCH WITH HEADPHONES AND AT 720P*
sorry for all caps

 

[NaeosPsy]

Wobble part is a bit interesting, intro sucks a bit.

 

[Waitee]

Make the song around a theme and it works a lot better. For example Skrillex - Reptile is based on Mortal Kombat quotes and Reso - Beasts in the Basement is based on some old video game quotes (I think the game was for NES but cant remember what game was it ). Great work anyway!

The theme isn't a must but it makes it quite a lot easier to make an interesting song. You could also add more to the song than just the wobble and intro.

About your wobble: interesting, but not catchy. Main thing when you develope a catchy tune on dubstep is that your wobble sounds like it's irregular, but actually repeats the same pattern.

anyway great work and good luck with your further songmaking!