(i dont need anymore critique) Could someone Critique my (Former) PB solve?

[SollsIsCool]

I didn't film my current PB (19.85) But i did film the other one (20.79)

 

[baseballjello67]

I would be happy to! DM me for further details. If you have discord we can do a discord call.

 

[Timona]

I didn't film my current PB (19.85) But i did film the other one (20.79)

I'll just be short and sweet.
- You actually made good use of inspection time properly (unlike me)
- Try to increase your turning speed and reduce pauses
-Also try improve your lookahead. Basically, as you're solving your current F2L pair, be looking for the next one
- As for the F2L, everything was solved efficiently, for a "beginner"
- Learn the U2 double flick, you used U U during the Sune OLL
- Also try and learn the D2 flick, it makes the A-perms way faster.

Good solve overall.

Bad critique tho, someone else can prolly critique you better than I have done.

 

[SollsIsCool]

I'll just be short and sweet.
- You actually made good use of inspection time properly (unlike me)
- Try to increase your turning speed and reduce pauses
-Also try improve your lookahead. Basically, as you're solving your current F2L pair, be looking for the next one
- As for the F2L, everything was solved efficiently, for a "beginner"
- Learn the U2 double flick, you used U U during the Sune OLL
- Also try and learn the D2 flick, it makes the A-perms way faster.

Good solve overall.

Bad critique tho, someone else can prolly critique you better than I have done.

thank you!

 

[Joe Archibald]

Also if you’re asking for a critique use an average solve rather than a pb

 

[baseballjello67]

I will post my critique on YouTube later on. I'll try to be very in-depth.

 

[CornerTwisted]

- You made your inspection time count(+1)
- Low TPS, could use work. 4th pair had good TPS though. (-3)
- Bad lookahead, could definitely improve. I think your recognition is pretty bad, and so you could benefit from looking for your next F2L peices while solving the current pair (-4)
- Really good F2L solutions for your speed (+2)
- No double flicks, slows down OLL/PLL (-2)
Try to fix all of the minuses.

 

[SollsIsCool]

- You made your inspection time count(+1)
- Low TPS, could use work. 4th pair had good TPS though. (-3)
- Bad lookahead, could definitely improve. I think your recognition is pretty bad, and so you could benefit from looking for your next F2L peices while solving the current pair (-4)
- Really good F2L solutions for your speed (+2)
- No double flicks, slows down OLL/PLL (-2)
Try to fix all of the minuses.

thank you!