After the first quarter of the session, I thought I could record the rest, so here it is. I'm gonna watch the whole thing to check what should I work on. The music was by Tom Lehrer.
This is very interesting I really like the idea. Something I noticed right away was your cross try and pre-plan the entire solution before you make a single turn doing this of course means you don't have to think about cross and you then wont be so hesitant to solve it on bottom which will allow you to focus on finding your first F2L pair and not making the cross, which will save you lots of time. I would suggest turn a little bit slower in f2l as well your look ahead at times seems to get lost which is eating seconds. Your last layer is pretty fluid though it looks like you don't have all your algs under your fingers yet and that's just drill. Over all very well done and happy cubing.