I'm sorry dude, but I average aroun 16 - 17 sec, and can not follow this tutorial. It's just all over the place. There are edits that cut too early, or for no reason, and you move through each step too quickly. If I was a beginner, I would turn this off and watch badmephisto's tutorial. You need to make it understandable so that new cubers will want to watch it. There are just too many mistakes with this, most of which are listed in previous posts. It's a nice effort, though. You need to pretend as though you're teaching a baby to speak. It's the same thing.