[Help Thread] Solve Critiques?

[ryan337dogo]

Hey guys!
I have a competition in November and I'm trying to get as fast as possible before then. Can you guys help me out by critiquing these solves?
ao5 - 14.58

 

[Cuban_Cuber]

I'm no professional but I immediately noticed a lot of pausing, so I think your look ahead and/or recognition could use some improvement.
Afterwards, you might want to look into increasing your turning speed.

Hope this helps, good luck improving

 

[FenTheGoat]

Could you give the scrambles? It's kind of blurry in the video. But I do see a lot of pausing between f2l and last layer if that helps.

 

[ryan337dogo]

12.92 - B' D' U' L2 U F2 L2 D B2 R2 U2 B' L' B2 U' L' F D L B'
13.62 - B' L' U2 B' U2 B' D2 F' U2 F2 L2 F' L2 D' F R F U' B2 D'
11.91 - B' D2 R2 U2 F2 U2 B2 R2 B' R2 F' D' R B L U' B2 U R2 D
17.21 - L2 U2 B2 L2 R2 D L2 U L2 U' L2 F2 R' U' B' D2 B2 D' B' L'
17.88 - F U2 R U F' U' F L D' L' D2 F2 R' B2 L2 U2 L U2 L' D2 L2