It's a wiki article, not your user page!
"He really has no idea how though. It was really lucky." This not wiki article language. I have nothing against you breaking the UWR or writing your article, if you put it into better format. You haven't bolded the title, added any links, put any sections in, added any categories, or even added the time of your UWR. It might as well have been a forum post put in the third person. Randomno (talk) 07:53, 5 January 2015 (UTC)